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In some countries the quality of life in larger cities is declining. Why do you think this is happening? What measures can be taken to stop it?

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The standard of living is dwindling in
few
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 countries. I believe it is because of the increased cost of living and
pollution
,
this
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on to
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 that and suggest possible solutions to tackle these issues to an extent. To embark on, the first and foremost reason for
this
 problem is
due to
 the expenses
that
is
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 needed
for meeting
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 daily needs. To be more precise, the increased population
is
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in
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 cities resulted in higher rent
amount
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amounts
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, which makes the house prices not affordable for
person's
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people
person
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 with average
salary
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salaries
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.
For instance
, in the
country
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countryside
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side
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 the rent for a
three
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three-bed
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bed room
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 house is 500 pounds
whereas
 in the city it is 900 pounds for a home. with the same facilities.
In addition
, the urban area has had more
pollution
 than the rural area which results from the significant increase in the number of vehicles. To illustrate
this
 , the quality of air in the
country side
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 is purer than the air in urban areas,
hence
, the people
is
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in
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 rural
area
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areas
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 may be more healthier than others in
city
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the city
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.
However
, if the
goverment
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government
implement
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 laws to regulate
the
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house rent with a margin line can make a difference in
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the affordabilty
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affordabilty
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affordability
 of houses for the public.
This
 can be done by informing the
landloads
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landlords
 and owners of building a standard rate by the authority.
For example
, for the same model houses, rather than owners wish, the government has to fix a rest.
Also
, in order to control
the
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pollution
, the authorities should encourage the public to use public transportation over
the
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private
one
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.
This
 can reduce the pöllution to a certain limit. To recapitulate, the quality of life in
city
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the city
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 is decreasing
because
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ofbecause
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 expenses
,
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 and
pollution
.
However
, rules by the government and
also
 encouraging the public to use public
mode
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modes
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 of transportation may help to maintain a quality of life in urban areas.
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