Write about the following topic: Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional food and traditional ways of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the near future, Instant
foods
will be consumed more than authentic food and ways of preparing it. This
might be because inactive lifestyle of people
. Although
I agree with this
view to some extent , However
, few communities still consider preparing and consuming traditional food due to
their cultural restrictions.
On the one hand, Families where both partners are working were leaning towards the convenient foods
that could be made within a few minutes. This
may be the reason for the increase in consumption of these foods
as people
are running towards their careers and want to minimize their time spent preparing three meals a day. Moreover
, some of these foods
are even considered to be healthy and are rich in protein and fibre which even doctors prescribe. Take Oats for example
, At present 90% of the society consumes this
as their breakfast since it saves time for preparation and is also
considered to be healthy. Meanwhile, a decade ago people
were not even aware of the existence of such
food.
On the contrary
, Still there are elderly people
who are not yet convinced with these instant foods
as they are habitual of cooking three meals every day. Unequivocally, in some communities’ authentic foods
fall under their family heritage. As a consequence
, they are restricted from consuming certain types of foods
. For instance
, few community people
would prefer not to consume non-Vegetarian
as it is against their cultural values. Correct your spelling
non-vegetarian
Hence
, such
people
will tend not to eat instant foods
as they would not know what type of ingredients are added to the meal.
To sum up
, Ultimately, I believe that because of the workaholic lifestyle, people
increased their consumption of convenience foods
replacing traditional ones and it is methodology. Despite some communities still following their principles and values.Submitted by vyshu.bakkiam on
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