The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The two tables show the data on the
temperature
, precise
time of sunrise and sunset in Correct word choice
and precise
Londan
and Sydney between 28th and 20th December Correct your spelling
London
in
2018. Change preposition
apply
Overall
, duration
between sunrise and sunset was longer in Sydney than in Correct article usage
the duration
London
. Thefore
, Sydney's Correct your spelling
Therefore
temperature
was significantly higher than London
's.
The temperature
of London
was around 4-9 degrees
on Friday, however
it fluctuated during the periodAdd a comma
,however
,
and reached Remove the comma
apply
maximum
of 10 Add an article
the maximum
a maximum
degrees
and minimum
of 5 Add an article
a minimum
degrees
on Sunday. On the other hand
, Australia's temperature
was
consistently escalated, it started from 17-26 Unnecessary verb
apply
degrees
on Friday,
and reached a peak of Remove the comma
apply
maximum
of 31 Add an article
a maximum
the maximum
degrees
and minimum
of 19 Add an article
a minimum
degrees
on Sunday.
Sunrise and sunset time of Londan
and Australia were exactly shared, and both of them followed an upward trend during the period. Correct your spelling
London
London
's sunrises were 08:05 and 08:06, whereas
Australia's were 05:45 and 05:46 from Friday to Sunday. Sunsets
of these cities had similar trends, and London
's sunsets
were before 4 p.m. but, Austalia's sunsets
were after 8 p.m.. There was an approximately 4 hours difference between the sunsets
of these cities.Submitted by historicalpen on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperature, london, degrees, sunsets with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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