A friend you made while you were studying abroad would like to spend a semester studying in your country. He/she has written to ask for your advice. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • describe why you think he/she will enjoy it • explain why you recommend studying at your university • give some advice about how to apply Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ____________,

Dear Ghan, I hope
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letter finds you well. I'm writing to thank you for the wonderful hospitality your family gave me when I studied in Singapore
last
year. I received your letter with some ideas about studying in Australia next year, and I'm eager to discuss
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a bunch of amazing marine biology programs on the west coast's universities. But, of course, the best one, is "Open Oceans" in the Perth Technical Uni. There are a lot of young, eminent and energetic guys teaching here. I finished that program a year ago and I had no problems
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a nice and cosy job. Please contact
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faculty's secretary Kate Adams, you can find her contact details on ptu.com.au, and discuss all questions that bothering you. She's a big friend of mine, I'll call her in advance today and give some details about your case. Hope to see you soon buddy, Vasilii
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