A friend you made while you were studying abroad would like to spend a semester studying in your country. He/she has written to ask for your advice. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • describe why you think he/she will enjoy it • explain why you recommend studying at your university • give some advice about how to apply Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ____________,

#friend #semester #country #advice #university #addresses #____________

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Dear Ghan, I hope

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letter finds you well. I'm writing to thank you for the wonderful hospitality your family gave me when I studied in Singapore

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year. I received your letter with some ideas about studying in Australia next year, and I'm eager to discuss

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a bunch of amazing marine biology programs on the west coast's universities. But, of course, the best one, is "Open Oceans" in the Perth Technical Uni. There are a lot of young, eminent and energetic guys teaching here. I finished that program a year ago and I had no problems

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faculty's secretary Kate Adams, you can find her contact details on ptu.com.au, and discuss all questions that bothering you. She's a big friend of mine, I'll call her in advance today and give some details about your case. Hope to see you soon buddy, Vasilii

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: <4

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: <4

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

154 words

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