The shown maps compare the condition of Sawry district between 1920 and 2020.

The pictures above show the difference that took place in the Sawry district between 1920 and 2020.

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, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from a largely rural to a mainly urban area. In 1920 the district had more trees and plenty of individual houses , but during the next century , the area witnessed numerous changes. The most noticeable is that on the northwest side of Oak Avenue, the cannery was demolished and covered into an office complex and the northeast half of the houses along the road were replaced with a skyscraper ,

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north road continued and a bridge on the Elmwood River. ,

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the beach along the stream transformed into a path for the bike.

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, in the north of Miller's Lake, Prestwich Primary School transformed into a petrol station and was moved to the east of Miller Lake,where most of the trees were chopped down. On the opposite of the

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school a lot of houses, apartments and shops were constructed along the road.