The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the amount of money which has been earned by three given
bakery
houses, namely,
Amandine
Bakery
,
Mari
Bakeshop
and
Bolo
Cakery in Calgary between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the
income
in
Amandine
Bakery
and
Bolo
Cakery increased significantly,
whereas
in
Mari
Bakeshop
it has declined substantially by the end of the observed period.
Initially
, the annual earnings of
Bolo
Cakery accounted for 20,000
dollars
, which was a quarter of the yearly
income
of
Mari
Bakeshop
during the same year. From 2000 to 2005, a figure which indicated the amount of money which was earned per year by
Amandine
Bakery
plateaued at approximately 55,000
dollars
,
however
between 2005 and 2006 the trends which demonstrate the annual
income
of
Amandine
Bakery
and
Mari
Bakeshop
equalized and their profit made up just under 60,000
dollars
.
In addition
, since 2006 the data which gives information about the annual earnings of
Mari
Bakeshop
has been decreasing considerably and by the end of the given ,timeline the amount of money earned per year constituted half of the yearly
income
of the same
bakery
in 2000. Between 2007 and 2008, the lines which show the annual profit of
Bolo
Bakery
and
Mari
Bakeshop
overlapped and their yearly
income
made up about 50,000
dollars
, which was more than twice as much as the yearly earnings of the
Bolo
Bakery
at the beginning of the given timeline.
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