Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own option.

The extinction of certain floras and faunas is widely considered

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environmental

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nowadays,

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others

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assume that there are even more existing critical issues. In my point of view, it is certainly true that losing certain creatures

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impacted natural imbalances. On the one hand, there is no doubt that the most natural disaster faced by humanity is

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pollution. It is evident that the

air

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inhaled has been contaminated with Carbon emissions from massive vehicles affecting chronic

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as lung cancer. Recent studies,

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, have found that there are several

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to reduce pollution in

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air

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by diminishing

vehicles

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usage and converting from gas-powered to electric vehicles.

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, the number of carbon emissions in

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air

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reduce

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significantly.

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, losing certain species of floras and faunas is an obvious environmental problem

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the fact that it will distort ecological balance. When natural balance is distorted, it will affect

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multiple food chains.

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, if

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predator

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predators

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such

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as

lion

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lions

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and

tiger

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extinct, the species that

used

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to prey

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the predator

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reproduce significantly, meanwhile, if producer

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organisms

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as grass stop growing, herbivore animal will

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their food.

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can be concluded that

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will face

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crisis if certain creatures

are perished

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. By way of conclusion,

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there are myriad environmental issues that humanity

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nowadays, I’m still convinced that the extinction of certain creatures will be a catastrophic natural disaster. The government plays an important role by enforcing environmental laws to remedy

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this problems

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