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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the frequency of
Americans
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 habit of eating in fast
food
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restaurants
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 between 2003 and 2013.
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it is clear that
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 the proportion of
people
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 who ate junk
food
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 at least once a week was the most in the year 2006.
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, there is an interesting similarity between the proportion of
people
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 who eat fast
food
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 every day and those who are not interested in junk
food
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 at all. As we can see, around 33% of US citizens consumed fast
food
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 one time a week in 2006. A similar data was true for
people
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 who went to fast
food
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restaurants
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 once or twice a month in the year 2013. The figure for junk
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 lovers in 2003 was 31% for once-a-week attendees and 30% for once or twice-a-month attendees. Another interesting point is related to data for everyday fast
food
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 eaters and
people
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 who never went to
such
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restaurants
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 from 2003 and 2013. Both figures show us less than 5% of American
people
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 like to eat a meal in fast
food
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restaurants
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 every day and
this
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 data for citizens who never wanted to taste fast
food
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 is just under 5% for all 3 years which is shown in the bar chart.
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