The charts below show each grade level’s activity and the total revenue gained from it, by percentage, from King Primary School’s recent fundraising event. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the fundraising activity conducted by each
grade
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Overall
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1 and the least was raised by Use synonyms
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3.
The highest contributor of 23.7% to the total profit made from the event came from Use synonyms
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contest
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contest
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5 came 3rd by contributing 18.3% Use synonyms
revenue
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6, by conducting a Use synonyms
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skill
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roughtly
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money
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Furthermore
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4 contributed to 13.9% of the profits.Use synonyms
Finally
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3rd
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To conclude
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contest
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failiure
compared to other events.Correct your spelling
failure
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grade, money, contest with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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