The charts below show each grade level’s activity and the total revenue gained from it, by percentage, from King Primary School’s recent fundraising event. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the fundraising activity conducted by each

grade

and the pie chart denotes the percentage of

money

raised by each

grade

respectively.

Overall

, most

money

was raised by

grade

1 and the least was raised by

grade

3. The highest contributor of 23.7% to the total profit made from the event came from

Grade

1 by conducting a dance

contest

.

This

figure was closely followed by 2nd

grade

by

conducting

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conducted

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a cake decorating

contest

.

Grade

5 came 3rd by contributing 18.3%

revenue

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of revenue

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from organising a cookie sale.

Grade

6, by conducting a

contest

for soccer

skill

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skills

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, took 4th place with

roughtly

Correct your spelling

roughly

a 3% difference in the

money

raised when compared to

grade

5.

Furthermore

,the art sale conducted by

Grade

4 contributed to 13.9% of the profits.

Finally

, the book sale organised by

3rd

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the 3rd

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grade

only contributed to 7.8% of the total

money

raised, which puts it in the

last

position.

To conclude

, the dance

contest

was a huge success and

conversely

, the soccer skill

contest

was a

failiure

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failure

compared to other events.