Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Certain concerned parties today contend that
celebrities
’ private lives
should not be publicized on social media
. In my opinion, the general citizenry has the right to be aware of the lives
of various public figures.
Some hold the opinion that each individual has an unalienable and basic right to privacy. If one’s idols are not engaging in illegal activity, there is no clear justification to publicize their personal lives
to the public other than as a form of entertainment or gossip. For instance
, if a celebrity begins a new relationship, it is common for the paparazzi to photograph them in public and report private details online. This
is an invasion of privacy and may harm their relationship even though the celebrities
have done nothing wrong. The only injury in these cases is to the mental health of those being reported on in public forums with little cause.
On the one hand, celebrities
have a social responsibility to set a good example for the general public. Modern media
consumers, especially younger people, these days spend more time online than ever before,
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therefore
are increasingly vulnerable to extreme views and the easy of
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celebrities
should regulate their personal behavior
, including staying away from drug abuse, not espousing dangerous viewpoints, and focusing on socially beneficial actions. Social Change the spelling
behaviour
media
can in this
way serve as a “watchdog” for celebrities
by reporting negative press, which will deter public figures from misbehaving.
In conclusion, I think celebrities
should allow citizens to learn about their personal lives
though
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through
media
, since fame is a privilege and they have a responsibility towards society at large. Citizens should only respect their privacy when it is a personal matter with little public relevance.Submitted by buttargurpinder73 on
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- secondly
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- moreover
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- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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