Television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well-educated today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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poor education quality among

children

nowadays is that they spend a lot of their time watching

television

programs

and

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things that are remotely connected to quality education. I completely agree with the statement that

television

cannot replace the book as a learning tool as it is far less educative and far more addictive.

Firstly

,

television

programs

have too

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audio-visual factors which can distract

children

. When

children

read

book

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books

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, they can concentrate more on the text and because of that, information can remain longer in their memory.

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contrast

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various sounds, images and colors of

programs

that

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in

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television

deprive the

children

from

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the educational aspect of them. The other reason that shows

television

is not suitable as a book

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when

children

learn through these

programs

, they lose their creativity.

Television

is prepared beforehand

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curriculums for

children

and in the long time they

accustomed

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to

gain

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knowledge and they can’t anymore feel the pleasure of

problem solving

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and being creative in different subjects. It is often heard that many

children

watch TV for long hours and

that is

detrimental to their health.

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television

programs

have

addictive

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nature and don’t let

children

concentrate on other important things like study or outdoor

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. It’s true that books are still the most appropriate learning tool,

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influence of technology in modern life is undeniable.

Television

programs

have appealing effects for

children

and

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to be a supplementary tool for

children

in their curriculum. In conclusion,

due to

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of

technology

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we can’t

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the

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learning only to books. The wise act is integrating

television

in

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curricular

plan

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and

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from their facilities.