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New technologies and ways of buying and selling goods are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#technologies #goods #lives #consumers
The current pace of advancing
technology
 has led
the
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 creation of countless opportunities and breakthroughs in the consumer market
while
trading-off
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 any goods. Based on my knowledge, it is singlehandedly true that technological advancements have an immense impact on
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people. To start with, the internet is arguably one of the if not the most important inventions in the
last
 century. It has revolutionized the
convention
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 methods of trading goods.
For instance
, by conveying traditional markets to the online platforms, the sellers' revenues have skyrocketed
as
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because these platforms allowed consumers to convenient shopping experience
as well as
 versatility.
This
 is especially beneficial for the people who have hectic schedules to go
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shopping.
Moreover
,
through
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 the help of
technology
, anyone can order anything from the most isolated places on Earth with a click of a button.
Furthermore
, as
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technology
 develops very rapidly, more ways are becoming available to taste consumers an exquisite feeling of shopping.
Although
 some people view
this
 continuously advancing
technology
 as a threat
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the
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humanity, I believe
cetain
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certain
 jobs like cashiers and store workers will be outperformed by machines run by
artifical
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artificial
 intelligence. Not only because they are extremely
faster
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 and less prone to errors in comparison with humans, but
also
they
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 are helping sellers to become more optimized and human-dependent.
To sum up
, I think it is impossible at
this
 point to envision a world without
the
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technology
,
thus
 it now has
became
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 an integral part of our
dailylife
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daily life
while
 buying and selling products.
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