You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

Poverty related

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death is a huge predicament faced by natives of third world

countries

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. With the vast improvements in the

health

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sector,

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should not be the case. I believe pharmaceutical authorities should cut down the prices of medications sent to poorer

countries

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to enable their folks

live

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longer.

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with, it is a fact that people die from not being able to pay for

drugs

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needed to make them recuperate.

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is quite common in the developing world.

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been reports about children in developing

countries

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losing their

lives

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from disease conditions which could have been prevented with vaccines or cured with

drugs

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. The main challenge

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is

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caretakers not being able to afford healthcare

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which are not free. Death

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is

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irreversible, it is heartbreaking to lose a soul because of money.

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, a number of

lives

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have been saved from the benevolence of others and

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goes to highlight that with subsidised healthcare

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,

lives

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will be saved. Despite the aforementioned problems, I believe if pharmaceutical companies cut down the

cost

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of

drugs

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sent to poorer

countries

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, it will go a long way to be helpful. They can do

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by incorporating the extra

cost

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in the products

their

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send to international nations so that the consumers indirectly pay.

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will prevent losses to the drug industries whilst saving

lives

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elsewhere

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. Doing

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gesture will avert many needless deaths.

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this

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, the governments in poorer societies should encourage

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their

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citizens to get very good insurance policies that can help with

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apply

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future

health

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expenses.

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, it is common knowledge that it isn't that natives of foreign

countries

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such

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as America are rich but rather they have good and effective insurance systems that

caters

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for the

cost

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of their

health

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.

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employing

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policy will

go

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apply

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help many people survive. In conclusion, one major problem facing the

health

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sector in developing

countries

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is expensive

services

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that

leaves

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leave

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the poor to die because they cannot pay for

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services

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.

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, drug manufacturers bringing down the

cost

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of

drugs

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is a suitable remedy to overcome preventable deaths.