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Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit students at the school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Education has evolved over the years. Nowadays, education is not only to gain academic knowledge.
However
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 it is the
overall
 growth of a student. Many different methods or experiments have been conducted to achieve different goals. One
such
 method is international exchange visits which are considered to have many advantages. Though it may have a few disadvantages as well. We shall discuss them
further
 in
this
 essay.
Firstly
, It has been observed that international trips boost many different qualities among the
students
. They get to learn about different countries, new languages, and their culture. Visiting and meeting new people of different mindsets and
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talking with them encourage
students
 to dream big and become more confident.
For Example
, one of my nephews had a visit to the United Kingdom from their school with schoolmates. When he came back his thoughts were at a different level, he looked more confident.
Moreover
, he was full of ambition.
Secondly
, Trips like that give them new opportunities and to explore their future plans. They can broaden their view and make their decisions better.
For instance
, After the UK visit, he was sure that he had to study abroad after his schooling.
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, there are a few disadvantages as well. Many people can't afford
this
 kind of
visits
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, and later their kids feel bad and demotivated. It
also
 creates a divide among the
students
 in the classes and they tend to tease each other. In conclusion, International trips outweigh only a few disadvantages compared to the advantages they provide.
However
, these issues can be overcome with a few changes in the management of
such
 programmes. Every parent and educationalist should encourage
such
 events and help
students
 to achieve their best.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educationalists
  • international exchange visits
  • global awareness
  • linguistic diversity
  • self-reliance
  • globalized world
  • professional trajectories
  • prohibitive
  • cultural shock
  • adaptation challenges
  • academic disruption
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