The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given illustration represents the difference between libraries in 2001 and 8 years later.
Overall
, the huge changes were in the western and eastern sides of the
map
, meanwhile, almost no change was in the southern
side
of the
map
. It can be clearly seen that in the past the
lest
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left
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side
of the
map
was for
seft
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soft
help and history, but in 2009 there added rooms
such
as fiction,kitchen,economics and low.
Moreover
, the northern
side
of the
map
changed,
for
instance
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fiction changed for children’s
book
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books
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and children’s
area
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areas
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. It is obvious that the eastern
side
of
map
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had
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changed.
For example
, newspapers and periodicals changed for films and DVDs.
Moreover
, the tables which were located in the centre were changed for one big.
In addition
under the newspapers added two medium size computers. It is interesting to note that the southern
side
of
map
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the map
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almost did not
changed
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in 8 years. In somewheres
size
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sizes
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might be increased only.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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