The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given illustration represents the difference between libraries in 2001 and 8 years later.
Overall
, the huge changes were in the western and eastern sides of the map
, meanwhile, almost no change was in the southern side
of the map
.
It can be clearly seen that in the past the lest
Correct your spelling
left
side
of the map
was for seft
help and history, but in 2009 there added rooms Correct your spelling
soft
such
as fiction,kitchen,economics and low. Moreover
, the northern side
of the map
changed, for
instance
fiction changed for children’s Add a comma
instance,
book
and children’s Fix the agreement mistake
books
area
.
It is obvious that the eastern Fix the agreement mistake
areas
side
of map
Add an article
the map
had
changed. Wrong verb form
has
For example
, newspapers and periodicals changed for films and DVDs. Moreover
, the tables which were located in the centre were changed for one big. In addition
under the newspapers added two medium size computers.
It is interesting to note that the southern side
of map
almost did not Add an article
the map
changed
in 8 years. In somewheres Change the verb form
change
size
might be increased only.Fix the agreement mistake
sizes
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