Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packing are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the evironment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem.

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million tons of

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waste

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is produced in the United States in one day . It is

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modern era, an increasing number of more and more humans believe that

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bottles and bad for

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nature .

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and propose some possible solutions to avoid them . There are several serious issues which are caused by

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lifestyle. One of them is environmental

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would mean that if the world is filled with

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waste

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but

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plants and

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are burning

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to get rid of it.

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causes the release of toxic gases into the atmosphere.

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, it is these toxic gases that cause the depletion of the Ozone layer .

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are breathing toxic air .

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conservationists,

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or factories are dumping them into the sea to get rid of them . Not only factories but

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beach vacationers

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leave

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bottles in the water .

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causes the extinction of marine

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the past two years, 2 million marine

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have died

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bags

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. To address these

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, the following steps should be taken .

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with, millions of factories around the world are better off recycling

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waste

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of incinerating it . If

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method becomes widespread individuals can breathe fresh air and

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the Ozone layer from degradation.

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, the government should be responsible for not throwing

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people

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will not face too many

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if they use

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instead

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ones.

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interesting facts, the USA is switching to

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things

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a lot of huge issues , including toxic air and

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of aquatic

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. The most effective solution is

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paper

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and processing.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packing are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the evironment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem.

Your opinion

Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on the streets. Still, there are robberies that happen inside houses. What do you think is the best thing a person can do to ensure his/her own security? Use specific reasons and examples to support.

In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Doctors recommend that older people should excersice regularly.However many of them do not exercise enough. What are the causes? What can be done to encourage them to exercise?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?