It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not.
Understanding the causes of our acts and reasons that someone
act
better than others in some positions is always interesting for people. Some people think it depends on our intelligence and some else think it is the result of our experiences and all Correct subject-verb agreement
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people can achieve that performance. As a neuroscientist, I absolutely agree with the second opinion because there is more evidence for its correctness.
First of all, I should say that we have some person with high intelligence in some works and we can't ignore it. Correct article usage
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phenomenon depends on physiology
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brain
which is really scarce. But the point is that the shape of our brain
causes different arrangement
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arrangements
neurons
which can facilitate the process of learning. Therefore
, this
phenomenon does not create any specific ability in us, for example
, in painting, but it facilitates this
path for us to learn painting more accurate
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point is, we know that all our decisions depend on Change the article
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our brain
brain
. So, we have a mass of Fix the agreement mistake
brains
neurons
in our head which are trained by analyzing input data from our ears, eyes and taste receptors. According to
this
theory, we all have the ability to do similar things; So, why these
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life
by our Fix the agreement mistake
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neurons
and our brain
learns the way of acting in various positions. So, we can play a Fix the agreement mistake
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chess like
Kasparov if we were in the same situation as him.
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series
of Correct article usage
a series
neurons
which can be tuned for better performance by getting more experiences
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we do not violate acquired intelligence, we consider it only a facilitating phenomenon So, there is no disability in a normal person against with talented one. they can achieve to
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