the tables below give information about sales of fairtraide labelled bananas and coffee

the tables below give information about sales of fairtraide labelled bananas and coffee
The tables show the amount
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of
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money spent on
Fairtrade
coffee
and
bananas
in two separate years in the
UK
,
Switzerland
, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
It is clear that
sales
of
Fairtrade
coffee
rose in all five European countries from 1999 to 2004, but
sales
of
Fairtrade
bananas
only went up in three out of the five countries.
Overall
, the
UK
saw by far the highest levels of spending on the two products. In 1999,
Switzerland
had the highest
sales
of
Fairtrade
coffeem
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coffee
coffees
at 3
million
euros
,
while
revenue from
Fairtrade
bananas
was highest in the
UK
, at 15
million
euros
. By 2004,
however
,
sales
for
Fairtrade
coffee
in the
UK
had risen to 20
million
euros
, and
this
was over three
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times
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higher than
Switzerland
's
sales
figures for
Fairtrade
coffee
in that year. The year 2004
also
saw dramatic increases in the money spent on
Fairtrade
bananas
in the
UK
and
Switzerland
, with revenues rising by 32
million
and 4.5
million
euros
respectively.
Sales
of the two
Fairtrade
products were far lower in Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. Small increases in
sales
of
Fairtrade
coffee
can be seen, but revenue remained at 2
million
or below in all three countries in both years.
Finally
, it is noticeable that the money spent on
Fairtrade
bananas
actually fell in Belgium and Sweden.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fairtrade, coffee, bananas, uk, switzerland, sales, million, euros with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • sales figures
  • Fairtrade labeled
  • bananas
  • coffee
  • time period
  • trends
  • influence
  • consumers
  • farmers
  • communities
  • increase
  • products
  • labelling
  • sustainable
  • ethically sourced
  • global market
  • demand
  • awareness
  • certification
  • marketing strategies
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