Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report fo a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

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This

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map illustrates the development of Charlyway

village

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between 1868 and 1994.

Overall

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, the roads and population increased during the time period

also

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they spread over the

village

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except

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the area of the park.

According to

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the map, there are two main roads in Charlyway

village

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on the west

side

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and north

side

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Secondly

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, the motorway was built in 1970 on the east

side

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of the

village

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through the main

road

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Finally

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, the railway and station were built in 1909 at the south margin of the

village

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and it was made over the main

road

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and motorway. The people lived right

side

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near the main

road

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till 1883 and they

spreded

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speeded

spread

their

village

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along the main

road

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from 1883 to 1922. It was a huge amount.

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, the population increased during five decades

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they built their homes near the railway. The population increased rapidly

as a result

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of that people made their homes near the motorway and the

central

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of the

village

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was maintained as a park and golf course.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, side, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

171 words

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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report fo a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?

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