The graph below shows the percentage of people in one country who accessed the news from four sources between 1995 and the present, with projections to 2025.

The graph below shows the percentage of people in one country who accessed the news from four sources between 1995 and the present, with projections to 2025.
The graph illustrates the
popularity
of four different
news
sources
in percentage, namely
TV
, Newspaper, Radio and
Internet
within 30 years from 1995 to 2025.
Overall
, it is evident that until 2020, television served as the majority of people's
news
sources
while
the
Internet
experienced a sharp increase in
popularity
.
Additionally
, the
Internet
is the only media
that is
getting more
favored
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while
the other
sources
are losing
popularity
over time. In 1995,
TV
started at the top with 70% of the surveyed population using it for getting
news
, and Newspaper and Radio got 57% and 52%, respectively.
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However
, these three
sources
have become less popular over time, with
TV
losing 20% of its
popularity
by the end of the term and the figures for Newspaper and Radio are expected to be halved. The
Internet
,
on the other hand
, the
Internet
has displayed an upward trend since 2000.
While
The number of
this
source’s users was nil at the beginning, it has increased dramatically from about 2% in 2000 to 40% by the end of 2020. In 2025, it is anticipated to maintain its upward trajectory and overtake
TV
as the primary source
for
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news
, with a share of 55%.
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