The diagram below shows information about student attendance in various schools. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the number of students attending four different secondary
schools
in three
separate years, including in 2000, 2005 and 2009.
It is clear that
the proportion of pupils attending community
Schools
rose in all three
years from 2000 to 2009, but percentages of others decreased in three
out of four schools
. Overall
, Community
Schools
witnessed a
highest increase in Change the article
the
three
years.
In 2000, Voluntary-controlled schools
had the highest percentage of students, at 52%, while
Grammar Schools
had just at
24%, with 12% in terms of Specialist Change preposition
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Schools
and Community
Schools
. By 2005, however
, percentages of students attending Voluntary-controlled schools
and Grammar schools
had declined to 38% and 19% respectively, while
Community
Schools
saw a considerable rise, at 32%. The year 2009 also
saw a dramatic increase in the proportion of pupils in Community
Schools
, rising by 58%.
In contrast
, Specialist Schools
and Grammar Schools
had slight decreases, at 10% and 12% respectively, whereas
Voluntary-controlled Schools
witnessed a sharp decline continuously, falling 20%.Submitted by baohoanguyenngoc1010 on
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