The bar chart compares the amount of money (in millions of euros) that people in four different age groups from Paris, France, spent on going to the cinema, restaurants and music concerts in 2019.
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The graph above shows the proportion of young adult participation in four divergent sports over three decades from 1990 to
present
.
It can be clearly seen that each area show different trends, but somehow ball games and biking have similar trend. Among all, ball games Correct article usage
the present
is
everyone's favourite in 1990, whilst now swimming Wrong verb form
were
takes part
as most popular sport.
In 1990, almost 35% Verb problem
is
teenagers
played ball games. Change preposition
of teenagers
Moreover
, their popularity declines
by nearly 30% in 2000 and Wrong verb form
declined
it's
Unnecessary verb
it
continue
Wrong verb form
continued
dipping down
to 20% in Verb problem
to drop
present
day. Skating Add an article
the present
starts
at 25% in 1990 and Wrong verb form
started
extremely falling
in Wrong verb form
fell
next
five years Correct article usage
the next
close
to 20%. Fix the infinitive
to close
Nevertheless
, in 2005 biking and roller skating rising
a bit to approximately 23% before they Wrong verb form
rose
keep
Verb problem
apply
felt
Correct your spelling
fell
down
to almost 15% in 2020.
Rephrase
apply
On the contrary
, swimming is the only one that shows significant rises. After below 15% from 1990 to 1995, it steadily increased for next
fifteen years reached around 25%, and Correct article usage
the next
have
a peak of approximately 34% by the end of 2020. Jogging, Wrong verb form
had
however
, have
the most fluctuation of all. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
Start
below 10% in 1990, it's gradually rising in 2020 at nearly 13%. The number dipped close to 9% in 2015Wrong verb form
Starting
,
before it increased to 15% in 2020.Remove the comma
apply
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