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How should we ensure that television is a possitive influence in the life of children?

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Nowadays, TVs are installed in every house, and these appliances broadcast information almost every
time
. Some people worry that the existence of
TV
 will create more disadvantages than advantages for children. In order to prevent that, parents should do a few things that will be discussed in the following paragraph.
First,
parents should filter the contents out. It means that only education programs are allowed to watch in the house. It can be done by checking at them every 20 minutes and immediately jumping in when inappropriate shows appear. But, the adults should not humiliate the kids when it happens.
Second,
limiting
the
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screen
time
 can prevent the drawbacks in the physical
as well as
 psychological aspects. The overdose of watching
time
 impacts the
eye seeing
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eye-seeing
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 quality and it can develop
as
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into
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 a bad addiction which means the amount of
time
 keeps growing and
it
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won’t stop.
For example
, adults can control it by turning the
TV
 off when the duration hits more than 1 hour. By doing
this
 regularly, kids won’t feel bothered if the viewing
time
 is over.
Lastly
, to ensure the shows are
the
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good programs only, parents can use the service of cable
TV
. It can provide many documentaries and other quality videos.
For instance
, the Net Geo or documentaries about ancient histories. In conclusion, selecting the shows, restricting the watching
periode
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period
, and using additional
TV
 providers could maximize the positive impacts which are consuming
education
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educational
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 videos
while
 preventing the negative impacts which are
the
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short-sighted eyes and addiction to
TV
.
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