Your local community is putting on an art show and is a little unsure about displaying some of the submissions. In an effort to resolve their internal dispute, they have decided to survey the community. They’ve asked you to identify and explain your preference for two options: Option A: Censor the artwork Option B: Do not censor the artwork

I would prefer that we

should

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censor

such

submissions rather than

portraying

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on an

art

show. Let me address the two primary reasons.

Firstly

, paintings

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such

a strong influence on people in terms of their thinking and admiration.

For example

, if a painting

is depicted

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on

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violence or racism,

which

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would create detrimental effects

in

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the community.

Furthermore

, it will create unwanted controversies among people, which claims to provide justification

of

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for

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such

painting

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.

Secondly

,

art

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the art

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show is open to the public, so we cannot restrict visitors based on their age criteria.

This

is mainly because families would prefer visiting the show with their children to educate them about the beauty of creative works.

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,

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introducing them to

such

shows is an opportunity for parents to boost their imagination, and increase their involvement in creative activities.

For instance

, in Canada,

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classes are mandatory considering the mental development of the younger generation. In summary,

although

all forms of

art works

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artworks

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are essential to admire

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beauty; I believe that certain portraits must be censored considering the personal disputes of people, and

benefits

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that the children gain.