Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, some people believe that living in a city where you have to speak a
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other than your mother tongue, can be challenging and cause both social and practical problems. Personally, I agree with the statement to some extent and I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.
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with, these days there are many people who are immigrating to different countries
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a variety of different reasons
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as education, work, weather and so on. The immigrants should be aware of the challenges they will face in the new country, and in my viewpoint, the major one will be the
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part.
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, they should prepare and learn the new
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before they go to live in the new country, because, it will have negative effects on your mental health if you don't know how to speak and communicate with others.
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, my mother immigrated to Canada when she was 40 years old and because she didn't know how to speak English she stayed home for a long period and it caused her to become depressed and anxious.
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, if humans immigrate at an early age, it will be easier for them to learn a new
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. They are more confident and they adapt to the new place much easier.
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, my sister came to Canada at the age of 11. She had to go to a French school as we came to Montreal. She didn't know French until she started school and she was able to learn it completely in less than a year,
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it was harder for me and my parents.
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, the younger you are, the easier it will be to learn a new
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. In conclusion, I believe that the way you get affected by the new
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, depends on your age and it is better to learn the
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of the country you want to move to, as early as possible.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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