Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased. Include Why you bought it What you liked and disliked about it Suggestions for improvement

Dear Sir, My name is Lisa. I am a resident of Rupganj city. I am writing

this

letter to express my concern over a magazine that was written by you named Murapara Jamidar Bari.

To begin

with, I bought the magazine from a bookstore as the magazine was based on a palace which is one of the most beautiful architectural buildings in my city.

Moreover

, I loved the way you depicted the immense beauty of the building.

In addition

to

this

, you

also

mentioned the secret room and its speciality which was brilliant.

Furthermore

, I spent most of my childhood in the field of historical building.

In addition

, I am introduced to each and every corner of it.

Overall

it was a great creation but you have made some errors in it.

First,

you did not mention the accurate number of the room.

Apart from

this

, in your publication, you mentioned it has 44 rooms but in reality, it has 48 rooms.

Besides

, you did not write about the mini museum, which has some historical preservations. As you escape

this

part, your consumers will never know about the museum which is one of the significant parts of the palace. It would be great if you corrected the information and added some columns about the museum. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Please let me know if you need my help to get the legit information. Thank you for the wonderful writing. Yours faithfully, Lisa