People used to live in the same city throughout their lives, but now they change where they live several times. What is the cause? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?
Nowadays
people
are more influance
and informative by social media and the internet. Now It is more common Correct your spelling
influence
influenced
families
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for families
live
in different Fix the infinitive
to live
cities
in their life
Correct your spelling
lifetime
time
. This
will provide more benifits
than negative Correct your spelling
benefits
impact
. I will discuss about Fix the agreement mistake
impacts
further
in this
essay.
The main reason people
move to different countries are
higher education and employment, in recent decades they Change the verb form
is
are
well Verb problem
have
informative
about global Replace the word
informed
oppertunities
. Correct your spelling
opportunities
Therefore
, they will look better
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for better
oppertunites
in the world and Correct your spelling
opportunities
as a result
of Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
they will live Add a comma
this,
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in variouse
variouse
Correct your spelling
various
cities
in their lifetime.
Moving to different location
will provide more positive advantages for Fix the agreement mistake
locations
people
, they can explore the
different cultures, Correct article usage
apply
it
will be Correct word choice
and it
helpfull
for them to Correct your spelling
helpful
addapt
to Correct your spelling
adapt
differnt
Correct your spelling
different
environment
quickly. Fix the agreement mistake
environments
for example
, if you have foreign
experience you know how to respect Add an article
the foreign
others
Change noun form
others'
other's
religous
, Correct your spelling
religious
such
as when the
Ramadan Correct article usage
apply
time
most of the middleast
countries Correct your spelling
middle east
people
not
have food outside Change the verb form
do not
did not
beofore
their breakfast, Correct your spelling
before
that is
their culture, people
who work with them Correct word choice
and people
also
not
eat outside that period. At the same Add a missing verb
do not
time
, you will have a quality of life
if you are in
Change preposition
apply
aborad
. Specially, if you are in Correct your spelling
abroad
developing
country sometime you do not have Correct article usage
a developing
developed
transportation system or good Correct article usage
a developed
eduaction
but if you Correct your spelling
education
in
Add a missing verb
are in
developed
country you have Add an article
a developed
achance
to experience them. Correct your spelling
a chance
For example
, you can travell
by sub way Correct your spelling
travel
trian
, it is more comfortable and Correct your spelling
train
fastest
transport method.
Correct article usage
the fastest
However
, if you live in different cities
you will not have time
to spend with close relations. In your entire life
you have to live away from them, for someone, Add a comma
life,
this
will be really hurtful. Specially
, you will miss your parents, when Rephrase
In particular
their
older age you can not take care of them. At the same Correct your spelling
they are
time
you will miss your brothers and sistersAdd a comma
time,
,
when Remove the comma
apply
Correct pronoun usage
you
your
young age you Correct pronoun usage
you
had
Wrong verb form
have
Correct article usage
a lot
lot
of memories with them, but if you stay Correct article usage
a lot
Change preposition
out
of
of the native city you will not have Change preposition
out
time
to attend thier
special Correct your spelling
their
occations
.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
occasions
this
topic has both advantage and disadvantes
but I personally believe if you live in different Correct your spelling
disadvantages
cities
you will have lot
of experience and Correct article usage
a lot
benifits
to your Correct your spelling
benefits
life
while
someone live
in the same city Change the verb form
lives
of
Change preposition
for
thier
whole Correct your spelling
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life
. Sometimes it will be board for them.Submitted by piuymi.madu on
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