The table shows how export values of diffirent items changedfrom 2009 to 2010
The table illustrates how the
values
of 5 exported items, measured in $HK billion, changed between 2009 and 2010. It also
shows by
how much percentage Change preposition
apply
each
product’s Change preposition
of each
export
values
rose or decreased.
Overall
, the overall
value
of exported products
rose throughout the study period, whilst some of the products
(clothing and manufacturing) exported
less in 2010. It is Add a missing verb
were exported
also
clear that the value
of exported metals and telecommunity increased dramatically.
To begin
, in the first year
, export
values
of equipment were the highest at 10.3 while
revenue of telecommunity amounted to 7.9 billion. One year
later the value
of former
product rose marginally up 1.3 from 2009 and that of Correct article usage
the former
latter
item increased significantly to 12.7, making it the most profitable product. Add an article
the latter
In addition
, end
of the period saw metals’ Correct article usage
the end
export
values
go up substantially by 120% form
2.3 in 2009.
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from
On the other hand
, there was a minimal decrease in the export
values
of clothing and manufacturing during the study period. The values
of clothing stood at 5 in 2010 down from 6 in 2009 Fix the agreement mistake
value
while
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the values
values
of exported manufacturing Fix the agreement mistake
value
products
saw 27
% fall in the final Correct article usage
a 27
year
. Despite these reductions, the overall
value
of all products
jumped by 20% to 38.4 in the final year
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