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The bar chart illustrates how the amount of students from 6 different countries who study at Australia changed over 2-year period from 2019 to 2020

The bar chart illustrates how the amount of students from 6 different countries who study at Australia changed over 2-year period from 2019 to 2020
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The bar chart gives information about the changes in the
number
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 of
students
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 in
Australia
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 who came from 6 different countries between 2019 and 2020.
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, there was a slight decrease in the
number
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 of
students
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 in
Australia
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 who came from China, Brazil and Malaysia throughout the period,
while
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 more
students
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 came to
Australia
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 from
the
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other countries in the
last
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 year. It is
also
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 clear that
,
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 Chinese
students
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 were far more than the others in both years. In detail, the
number
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 of Chinese
students
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 amounted to 182.325 making them the most common
students
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 in
Australia
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, whilst the start of the period saw only a small
number
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 of Brazilian and Malaysian
students
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 come to
Australia
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 (22.859 and 19.564 respectively). One year later, the
number
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 of Chinese
students
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 decreased substantially
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from 182.325 to 167.568.
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However
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However,
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 there was a marginal decrease in the
number
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 of both Brazilian and Malaysian
students
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.
On the other hand
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, higher numbers of
students
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 from India, Nepal and Vietnam come to
Australia
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 in the final year. The
number
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 of
students
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 in
Australia
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 who came from India was 92.024,
while
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students
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 from Nepal stood at half of that
number
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 in 2019. In 2020, there was a slight growth in the amount of those
students
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. (108.049 and 50.252 correspondingly).
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, the
number
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 of Vietnamese
students
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 in
Australia
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 jumped minimally up to 100 from 22.204 in 2019.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 9 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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