The bar chart illustrates how the amount of students from 6 different countries who study at Australia changed over 2-year period from 2019 to 2020
The bar chart gives information about the changes in the
number
of students
in Australia
who came from 6 different countries between 2019 and 2020.
Overall
, there was a slight decrease in the number
of students
in Australia
who came from China, Brazil and Malaysia throughout the period, while
more students
came to Australia
from the
other countries in the Correct article usage
apply
last
year. It is also
clear that,
Chinese Remove the comma
apply
students
were far more than the others in both years.
In detail, the number
of Chinese students
amounted to 182.325 making them the most common students
in Australia
, whilst the start of the period saw only a small number
of Brazilian and Malaysian students
come to Australia
(22.859 and 19.564 respectively). One year later, the number
of Chinese students
decreased substantially down
from 182.325 to 167.568. Rephrase
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However
there was a marginal decrease in the Add a comma
However,
number
of both Brazilian and Malaysian students
.
On the other hand
, higher numbers of students
from India, Nepal and Vietnam come to Australia
in the final year. The number
of students
in Australia
who came from India was 92.024, while
students
from Nepal stood at half of that number
in 2019. In 2020, there was a slight growth in the amount of those students
. (108.049 and 50.252 correspondingly). In addition
, the number
of Vietnamese students
in Australia
jumped minimally up to 100 from 22.204 in 2019.Submitted by shakhzodbekmirzaev7 on
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