You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties You should write at least 150 words

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Dear Pat, Hope you are doing well! Thank you so much for offering your help

while

I’m on holiday. I’ll be much more relieved knowing that you’ll take care of the house and Marnie

while

I’m away. In case you need to contact me you can reach me at

this

number: 692276786. Let me explain more about Marnie. As you know, she normally behaves properly and should not

give

Verb problem

have

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any

problem

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problems

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. You just need to feed her twice a day. Unfortunately, she has been sick for a few days so she will need to take her medicine every day before midnight. I need one more

favor

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from you, could you please water my orchids? Once per day should be fine. I normally do it in the morning but you can do it whenever it’s more convenient for you. Thanks again for your help and make yourself at home! Love, Sara.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

150 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?