The chart below shows the number of Internet users in three different countries and the world average between 1998 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of Internet users in three different

countries and the world average between 1998 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting

and reporting the main

features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented bar chart
give
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information about the number of
minutes
used for phone calls in the UK in local fixed
line
, national and international fixed
line
and mobiles over a period of 7 years between 1995 and 2002. It can be seen from the bar chart that the population of
minutes
used for phone conversations in the UK
into
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local fixed
line
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lines
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is always the highest during
the
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time,
while
this
data for mobiles is
lowest
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the lowest
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. The
overall
count of
minutes
spent on telephone calls using national and international fixed
line
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lines
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increased significantly every year. In 1995, the local fixed
line
used to make calls was over 70
billion
minutes
.
Then
this
figure increased steadily and reached
the
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peak at 90
billion
minutes
in 1999. After climbing, the data for local fixed
line
using
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decreased
about
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5
billion
minutes
per year in the following year. From 1995 to 2002, the figure for the total
minutes
spent on telephone communication
into
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on
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national and international fixed
line
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lines
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was 37
billion
minutes
in 1995 and gradually
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went
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up to 60
billion
minutes
in 2002. The amount of
minutes
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mobiles
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by mobiles
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for phone calls in the UK is always low compared with other types,
this
figure rising from 2
billion
minutes
at
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in
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1995 to over 45
billion
minutes
in 2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, line, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Internet penetration
  • Trend
  • Growth rate
  • Increase/decrease
  • Comparative analysis
  • Significant
  • Average
  • Fluctuation
  • Plateau
  • Surge
  • Spike
  • Decline
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