Some people think that in modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other. But others say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, technological development made drastic variations in our society. And, it is argued whether recent social circumstances make individuals more reliable to

others

or not.

This

essay will show you both sights of it. Recent generations are dependent because they contact a lot.

On the other

hand

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they are independent

,

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because they don't get

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situation

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easily to get sincere

relationship

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with

others

.

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, I totally agree with the idea that individuals are independent of each other these days. To commence with, many

people

insist that human beings are dependent. The rate of contact with

others

is increased if we compare it to the past. Because of the progress of technology, we don't have a limitation of time and distance when contacting someone anymore.

For example

, you can watch

people

who come from different countries communicate easily by using talking apps.

In addition

, you can talk with your friends or family in cyberspace even if you're not with them in reality and

people

upload their recent life by using social apps.

However

, I literally consider that the public is independent now. In the past,

people

have worked and studied together in the same place.

On the other hand

, overcoming the situation of the corona,

people

were get

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used

meeting

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in

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online even if communication is constituted with expression of face.

For example

, teachers use Zoom or other online teaching programs to give lectures to their students.

Moreover

, workers give feedback by using messenger and it results in a lack of communication about their privacy. In conclusion, because the number of contacts

are

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increasing, it can be said that the recent generation is dependent

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others

.

However

, because

people

are focused on contacting

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cyberspace using electronics

such

as mobile phones, it can be said that they don't have enough chance to participate in real communication in the same place.