The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996
The line chart illustrates the
complaints
made against noise
pollution
such
as road work, factories, traffic and domestic/household in Newtown city from 1980 to 1996.
Overall
, the highest noise
pollution
increased by the roadworks while
domestic/household number
of complaints
deceased at the end
of the year. All four types of noise
pollution
have experienced fluctuation.
As per the line graph, in 1980 all of them received an equal number
of complaints
. However
, the road works remained steady in 1982. While
industrial sector complaints
grew by the 200people in 1982 and they dramatically rose over the year and in 1990 a large number
of people complaint
against them around 700. Replace the word
complained
On the other hand
, road work was steady in 1984. Moreover
, in 1990 it significantly increased throughout all the past years and reached up to 1250 complaints
which is the highest number
. Furthermore
, domestic/households have fluctuation in the number
of complaints
while
traffic noise
remained unchanged till 1984 and complaints
dropped down by 100 in 1996 and reached 600. Nevertheless
, complaints
against domestic/ household decreased all these years and became lowest in comparison to other pollution
.Submitted by pr6272189 on
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