The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996

The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996
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The line chart illustrates the
complaints
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made against
noise
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pollution
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such
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as road work, factories, traffic and domestic/household in Newtown city from 1980 to 1996.
Overall
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, the highest
noise
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pollution
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increased by the roadworks
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domestic/household
number
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of
complaints
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deceased
at the end
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of the year. All four types of
noise
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pollution
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have experienced fluctuation. As per the line graph, in 1980 all of them received an equal
number
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of
complaints
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.
However
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, the road works remained steady in 1982.
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industrial sector
complaints
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grew by the 200people in 1982 and they dramatically rose over the year and in 1990 a large
number
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of people
complaint
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complained
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against them around 700.
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, road work was steady in 1984.
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, in 1990 it significantly increased throughout all the past years and reached up to 1250
complaints
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which is the highest
number
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.
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, domestic/households have fluctuation in the
number
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of
complaints
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while
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traffic
noise
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remained unchanged till 1984 and
complaints
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dropped down by 100 in 1996 and reached 600.
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,
complaints
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against domestic/ household decreased all these years and became lowest in comparison to other
pollution
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words complaints, noise, pollution, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Complaints
  • Environmental Health authorities
  • Noise pollution
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Trend
  • Spikes
  • Fluctuations
  • Time frame
  • Population growth
  • Industrial development
  • Public awareness
  • Implications
  • Addressing the issue
  • Data analysis
  • Year-on-year changes
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