You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter, 1. Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job. 2. Say what else you could do for the family. 3. Give your reasons for wanting the job.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to express my interest in a Telugu tutor, which was advertised in the Sydney newspaper

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Monday.

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, I graduated from Andhra University with a master's degree in Telugu literature.

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pursuing my master's, I worked as a Telugu tutor in a college for almost 4 years. Students always appreciated my teaching methodology and rated me as one of the top five in the college.

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, I am an excellent home chef with expertise in different cuisines. So, it would be a great opportunity to work at your place as a home cook and teach you some of my customs and traditions.

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job would be really helpful for me because it will take care of all my living expenses in Australia by taking of burden off my parents' shoulders.

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is a great opportunity for me, because

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adds to my experience of teaching kids, as I would like to pursue my career as a professional teacher. I strongly believe that coming to Australia could be a turning point in my life. I hope

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provides all the relevant information and, I am

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attaching the demo video of my class. Kindly let me know your interest in my application. I look forward to an affirmative response. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Satya Sannihith Lingutla

satyasannihith08Fri Oct 06 2023

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task achievement

Provide more specific examples of your teaching methodology and how students have benefited from it.

coherence cohesion

Elaborate on the customs and traditions you can share with the family.

coherence cohesion

Consider restructuring the letter to have a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

coherence cohesion

Use a more formal and appropriate closing phrase.

grammatical range and accuracy

Proofread to correct minor grammatical errors.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

223 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

TESOL certification
Experience in teaching children
Knowledge of Australian culture
Passion for language education
Flexible and adaptable
Design customized lesson plans
Patient and understanding
Strong communication skills
Interpersonal skills
Participate in family activities
Enthusiasm for cultural exchange

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