You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter, 1. Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job. 2. Say what else you could do for the family. 3. Give your reasons for wanting the job.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in a Telugu tutor, which was advertised in the Sydney newspaper
last
Monday.
Firstly
, I graduated from Andhra University with a master's degree in Telugu literature.
While
pursuing my master's, I worked as a Telugu tutor in a college for almost 4 years. Students always appreciated my teaching methodology and rated me as one of the top five in the college.
Furthermore
, I am an excellent home chef with expertise in different cuisines. So, it would be a great opportunity to work at your place as a home cook and teach you some of my customs and traditions.
This
job would be really helpful for me because it will take care of all my living expenses in Australia by taking of burden off my parents' shoulders.
Moreover
,
this
is a great opportunity for me, because
this
adds to my experience of teaching kids, as I would like to pursue my career as a professional teacher. I strongly believe that coming to Australia could be a turning point in my life. I hope
this
provides all the relevant information and, I am
also
attaching the demo video of my class. Kindly let me know your interest in my application. I look forward to an affirmative response. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Satya Sannihith Lingutla
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task achievement
Provide more specific examples of your teaching methodology and how students have benefited from it.
coherence cohesion
Elaborate on the customs and traditions you can share with the family.
coherence cohesion
Consider restructuring the letter to have a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Use a more formal and appropriate closing phrase.
grammatical range and accuracy
Proofread to correct minor grammatical errors.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • TESOL certification
  • Experience in teaching children
  • Knowledge of Australian culture
  • Passion for language education
  • Flexible and adaptable
  • Design customized lesson plans
  • Patient and understanding
  • Strong communication skills
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Participate in family activities
  • Enthusiasm for cultural exchange
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