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some individuals think that permitting young ones to make their own preferences on their
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issues (like meals, clothing and pleasure) there is a possibility of
resulting in a community of persons who only think about their personal desires
others
opine that, it is essential for kids to decide on agendas that relates to them. I believe it is good to allow teenagers to make their own choices that
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to them and the following
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paragraphs will discuss both instances.
On the one hand, giving
the liberty to decide on what they want to eat, wear and the kind of entertainment they want to engage in makes them selfish and unaccountable for their actions.
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youngsters will feel superior over their peers as they grow and would not like to take
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pieces of advice
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or counsel from others since they have always had the sole privilege to
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their choices without interference.
, in a family where
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of
are raised, parents would have to work extra hard to provide for the kids because the young ones decide on what they want and not what the family can afford.
, it is
argued by some people that
should be permitted to take stances only
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that concern them which I concur with. When young
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choices on matters
as their future careers, education etc they can be guided by their parents, elder siblings, family, teachers and significant others and
will make the
accountable, responsible and take mentorship which will in the long run benefit themselves, the society and the world at large.
Mr. Sefa Kayi said he was mentored by his mother when he decided to take up a future career in Journalism and she helped nurture his passion
his success and impact in the world of Broadcasting and Journalism.
, as it is agreed by some persons that young individuals should be given the mandate to decide on their preferences
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their daily matters, other
suggests they should be allowed to only
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decisions relating to them which I share in that opinion, will save our community of greedy individuals and make our young adults have a sense of responsibility and accountability.