You recently travelled abroad and had some issues at airport. Write a letter to airport manger provide The flight details What the problem was What suggestions you could give

#airport #manger #flight #suggestions

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my dissatisfaction with the services I received at your

airport

. My name is Amrinder, and I was thrilled about my trip to Goa,

however

, the excitement turned into grave disappointment when I landed in Goa. I took the flight from Toronto Pearson

Airport

to Goa International

Airport

on the 13th of September. My flight number was A123.After my arrival, I was informed by the representative at the baggage collection centre that my bags were missing.

Consequently

, I went to the 'Lost and Found' section to lodge the complaint where I was provided with no assistance for about four hours

due to

a lack of staff. After the submission of the form, I had to wait another few hours to acquire my luggage.

Hence

, I embarked on my vacation with

this

negative experience. As the

airport

manager, I would like you to consider these issues seriously. In order to improve the services, you could take the suggestion of hiring people into consideration. Thank you for giving the matter your attention, and I look forward to your positive response. Yours faithfully,

Submitted by amrin.sbk3 on Fri Oct 06 2023

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