More and more countries are making university education completely free for their citizens. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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access to
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basic information is too easy with the help of science and technology
such
as by using the internet and chatbots.
While
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people
can easily reach the basic information from these resources, the more complex information
such
as natural sciences and engineering can only be reachable from the educational facilities which are universities in many
countries
.
Moreover
, with the modernized and financially stable
governments
, more and more
countries
are making
university
education
completely free for their citizens which will push science,
education
levels and technology to
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higher and more advanced levels for all humanity.
Firstly
, with
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free
university
education
, the
students
who do not have any financial resources to spare for
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higher
education
but have a brilliant
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can have an opportunity to prove their
geniousity
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generosity
seniority
or their commitment. With the opportunity they have, they can push the limits of their major subject.
For instance
, in Turkey, most of the universities are free and with
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free
university
education
,
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committed and intelligent
students
can improve themselves, their
countries
and even the World. The Nobel Prize winner Prof. Sancar is the biggest example of
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committed and intelligent
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not have any financial resources when he was
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, but with the free
education
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he was able to reach
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the highest point in his major.
On the other hand
,
although
the life quality, the advancement in science and technology in these
countries
will increase simultaneously with
this
education
movement, there are some disadvantages
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for the
governments
. As a disadvantage, since
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higher
education
is free, some
people
tend to abuse
this
opportunity to escape from their other responsibilities to their
governments
.
For example
, in Turkey again, some
students
who
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graduated from
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high school register to
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free universities in order to only look like "
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" but not to be
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fully "
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" since the
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free healthcare advantage from the government without paying any taxes.
Furthermore
, the
students
in Turkey do not have to fulfill the limited-time military service until they finish their
education
which is another advantage abusement is used by some
people
. With respect to these examples, the
governments
are suffering from insufficient income from taxes and
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amount of soldiers to defend the frontiers of the country which turns
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a disadvantage for these
countries
. In conclusion,
although
there are various advantages of making
university
education
completely free
such
as developing the whole country and humanity, there are some
people
who are going to use
this
advantage for selfish purposes which causes some disadvantages for the
governments
.
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