Your parents will be celebrating their 40th anniversary next month. You are planning a big celebration, but you are not sure how to make the occasion really memorable. Write to your best friend, Joan, who is a professional event planner. In your letter: •explain why the occasion is special • ask for her assistance • set up a time to meet at your friend's convenience to discuss your plans Begin your letter as follows: Dear Joan, You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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Dear Joan, Long time no see! As far as my memory recall, we met at John’s bachelor party, what a blast we had back

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. Expecting the same from you

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time. Actually, my parents are going to have their 40th marriage anniversary on Sept 21st the coming month and I want to make it

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extraordinary, as I am planning to gift a long-lasting car they’ve always dreamed of.

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, I am planning to inundate them with happiness by revealing the pregnancy news of my wife as they’ll soon be grandpa and grandma. I started with the guest list and was checking in some venues for the event, and suddenly your name first struck my mind. What a fool, I’d be if I don’t let my best buddy plan for

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awesome event as you’ve always nailed with events in the past. Will you be

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over the event planner role ? If so,

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let’s meet on Wednesday night, to have regular weekends for finalizing the plans and confirming the venue of the Lonvala resort, where my parents spent their first honeymoon. Feel free to hit me with other convenient times if needed. Can’t wait to hear from you to make

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day memorable. Take care. Harsh

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

210 words

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