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The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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This
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 table illustrates details about
payments
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 of high school
teachers
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 in five countries in 2009.
Overall
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, Luxembourg
teachers
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 earn the highest
salary
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 among the five countries
teachers
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 and Australian
teachers
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 get the lowest
payment
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 for teaching as maximum salaries.
According to
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 the table, Australian
teachers
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 started their job role with 28000
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payments
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 and after 15
years
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 they earned a total of 48000
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 which is their maximum
salary
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 after 9
years
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. The Korean teacher's salaries started at 30000 and after 34
years
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 they reached their maximum of 62000 dollars.
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, Denmark
teachers
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 started 45000
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 and after eight
years
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 they can earn their maximum
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 of 54000.
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, the Japanese
teachers
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 started
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 at 34000 and after 15
years
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 they reached 65000
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 after 37
years
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 they can earn their maximum
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 of 86000 which is the second highest
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 for
teachers
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 among those countries. Luxembourg
teachers
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 started at 80000 salaries and after 30
years
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 they earn 132000
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 which is the highest
payment
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.
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