The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in

2009.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
This
table illustrates details about
payments
of high school
teachers
in five countries in 2009.
Overall
, Luxembourg
teachers
earn the highest
salary
among the five countries
teachers
and Australian
teachers
get the lowest
payment
for teaching as maximum salaries.
According to
the table, Australian
teachers
started their job role with 28000
salary
payments
and after 15
years
they earned a total of 48000
payments
which is their maximum
salary
after 9
years
. The Korean teacher's salaries started at 30000 and after 34
years
they reached their maximum of 62000 dollars.
Moreover
, Denmark
teachers
started 45000
payments
and after eight
years
they can earn their maximum
payment
of 54000.
However
, the Japanese
teachers
started
salary
at 34000 and after 15
years
they reached 65000
then
after 37
years
they can earn their maximum
salary
of 86000 which is the second highest
payment
for
teachers
among those countries. Luxembourg
teachers
started at 80000 salaries and after 30
years
they earn 132000
payment
which is the highest
payment
.
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