Governments give a lot of support to artists,even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used else where. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Some argue that
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who rule a country provide
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with a lot of finances because they think that the
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represent the cultural identity of a nation
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, others are of the opinion that, these finances should be used for other beneficial purposes because they are of the view, that a piece of paintings does not present a
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completely. I believe, that representing a
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fully will benefit
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more. some
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think that an artist portrays the
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of a nation, and in order to promote the cultural identity government should spend more resources to support
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artists
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.
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amount of money will not be wasted, because
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a spending will promote
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to
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of different nationalities and, convince them to visit their land.
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, M.F Hussain is a famous artist from India. He presented different paintings in the USA at multiple art expos, which depicted the Taj Mahal ,the Qutub Minar and the Red Fort.These three monuments are an icon of Indian
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to the world. I believe, that
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small pieces of paintings don’t represent the
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and tradition of a nation completely as compared to the
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of that country themselves.
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from one
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represent their
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totally to the other parts of the world rather than, just one piece of painting.
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means the dress code of that
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, food cuisine, and language. The more famous a
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among the international community, the more tourists it attracts to its lands. Tourism benefits a country tremendously through local spending by tourists.
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,a Large number of Indians live in the UAE. Indian
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is the most famous
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in the UAE. Many
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from different parts of the UAE visit India every year to explore Indian
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and its diversity.
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, Governments should not provide
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with finances because they don’t represent the
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fully rather these resources should be utilized for other beneficial purposes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • promote
  • culture
  • creativity
  • economic growth
  • tourism
  • social development
  • personal development
  • merit
  • financial support
  • balanced
  • transparent
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