Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
However
, accessibility to foods
will increase considerably because so many people prefer to choose easier foods
to eat, compared to conventional food
that needs time to prepare. I totally disagree because most convenience foods
are unhealthy foods
and have detrimental effects on the body. Moreover
, traditional foods
can disappear in the future.
On the one hand, the majority of convenience foods
contain unhealthy nutrition. This
food
has low levels of substances which are so pivotal for the body such
as high proteins and minerals. In addition
, the packed food
is the products that have been preserved before they are delivered to society
due to
still being in good condition for a long time. Even though these foods
make community easier to prepare their meals and not consume time, they might also
be vulnerable suffer some diseases. For instance
, recently the number of community who have been hospitalized has risen markedly since the public always consumes unhealthy meals like canned food
. Consequently
, their bodies are more easily attacked by pathogens.
On the other hand
, the extinction of traditional foods
will decrease. These foods
can represent an identity in one region or country. Presently, despite learning and cooking conventional foods
, society
especially, younger generations, tend to have a big curiosity about foreign foods
such
as Korean foods
and Japanese foods
. As a result
, it not only may cause the ability of society
to preserve home-cooked food
to decline day to day but also
society
can have a lack of knowledge and experience about their traditional foods
.
In conclusion, although
useful foods
are simpler to prepare and eat, I strongly believe that they can have more negative effects because those foods
tend to contain slight nutrients and besides
,that
conventional Correct word choice
apply
foods
may be rarer to find in the future.Submitted by addaragelal on
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