In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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to trend that many communities are fond of finding out the history of the
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will try to depict the reasons
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this
including possible measures by which finding
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the history
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of a house gets easier. First of all, many people take finding
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the history
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of the
place
they live in or are
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to as a hobby
this
adds up to the joys of living at that
place
.
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finding
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the past where one lives becomes crucial for safety purposes as well.
Furthermore
, It can
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help the seller
while
selling the building
for example
, if the ex-resident of the house is a famous celebrity
then
providing
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while
selling it can get sold in more cost.
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talk
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about
the ways which can help one in finding about the
place
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then
the most popular one is through
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most
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from my point of
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would prefer getting information from the neighbourhood as they live close
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the
place
.
however
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it's difficult to get full information from neighbours in some cases still it can provide more data as compared to websites. In conclusion, I think
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a hobby for many citizens.
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should be taken as a primary task when thinking of
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in a
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, specifically for safety purposes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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