Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy? (Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.)

Nowadays, the majority

people

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of people

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belived

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believed

believe

the important way to have

happiness

life is wealth.

While

others think,

the

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happiness

can happen

on

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through

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acivities

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activities

in their life. Personally,

this

essay explores the way in which wealth can

influnece

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influence

their

happiness

and

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shows

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alternative

soucres

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sources

to gain

happiness

. there is undeniable evidence that money can contribute to

happiness

.

Firstly

,

finanical

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financial

security is a significant method of

initital

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initial

people

's needs

such

as housing, food, clothes and health care.

For instance

, the

mian

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main

reason for stress is

finanical

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financial

problem

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problems

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which is an outcome

in

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of

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everydays

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everyday

as a result

,

people

have

a

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awful mental health so there have relative between wealth and

happiness

hence

stress and

anixety

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anxiety

can reduce and increase

from

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apply

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income.

on the other hand

, there

are

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is

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some alternative

method

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methods

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such

as helping

other

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others

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, spending time by

theirself

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themselves

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or

friends

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with friends

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and their

habbit

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habits

.

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,

soical

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social

connections and relationships can provide emotional support and a sense of belonging, which money alone cannot provide.

However

, personal growth and

thieir

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their

passion are the best

role

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roles

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in

happiness

which

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and

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they can earn enjoyment and

fullfillment

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fulfilment

by theirself to understand their values.

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,

somepeople

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some people

passionate about a hobby or a cause discover immense joy and purpose in pursuing it. In conclusion,

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happiness

is connect

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is connected

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to

people

's

life styles

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lifestyles

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,

family's

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family

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relationship

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relationships

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and finanicial because in modern society,

somepeople

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some people

have

a

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happiness

for achieve

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to achieving

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goals which

it

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means they can get

opportunity

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the opportunity

an opportunity

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to

discovery

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discover

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the

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happiness

.