The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart depicts how many American families by their yearly
income
in three different years (2007, 2011, and 2015).
Overall
, household
with $75,000-$99,999 Add an article
a household
income
was the lowest throughout the period. On the other hand
, those whose income
were
above one hundred thousand dollars Change the verb form
was
become
the only one that reached above 30 Wrong verb form
became
millions
residences.
Change to singular
million
To begin
with, in 2007, 2011, and 2015 the amount of family
with $75,000-$99,999 revenue was almost the same at slightly Fix the agreement mistake
families
bellow
15 Correct your spelling
below
millions
. These were smaller Change to singular
million
compare
to the other domestic type which remained around 20 Replace the word
compared
millions
to 33 Change to singular
million
millions
.
Change to singular
million
Compare
to the other Wrong verb form
Compared
type
of households, those with more Fix the agreement mistake
types
than100k
Correct your spelling
than
Correct article usage
a dollars
dollars
yearly Fix the agreement mistake
dollar
income
peaked the highest at around 30 millions
. the other two competitors which Change to singular
million
was
$25k-$49.k and Change the verb form
were
bellow
Correct your spelling
below
twenty five
thousand Add a hyphen
twenty-five
was
peaked at around 28,000,000 and 30,000,000 respectively both in 2011. Another type of Unnecessary verb
apply
income
namely $50k-$74k slightly stable during the period with average
Correct article usage
an average
20
Change preposition
of 20
millions
families.Change to singular
million
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