Chart shows the percentages of tourists to a holiday resort in Australia
The pie chart shows the percentage of people who travel in
Australia
by continents
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continent
Asia
, US
, Europe and others. Correct article usage
the US
Besides
, the table gives information to these tourists
about average
length of stay, most popular accommodation and main activity at a particular holiday resort in Add an article
the average
Australia
.
Overall
, These tourists
who came from Asia
and the United States registered the largest figure, while
those from Europe and others recorded the smallest number. Most European and American tourists
stayed an average of 2 weeks and Asian and American tourists
were into useing
4 or Correct your spelling
using
5 star
hotels and went sightseeing.
The Add a hyphen
5-star
Asia
and US continents had the highest percentage of tourists
to Australia
for
37 Change preposition
at
percent
and 35 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
While
just 18 percent
of European tourists
went to Australia
and that figure in other groups was 10 percent
.
From the table, Asian tourists
stayed an average of 7 days. Those Europeans and American
stayed longest at 16 days and 14 days. People from Fix the agreement mistake
Americans
Asia
and America were big fans of 4 or 5 star
hotels and went sightseeing. Meanwhile European and Add a hyphen
5-star
others group
were rather Camping and caravan Fix the agreement mistake
other groups
as well as
water-related activities than sightseeing.Submitted by sinh.ielts on
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