The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The supplied illustrations give information about changes in school that began in 1985 and continue to nowadays.

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, playing fields decreased in size over a period,

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the number of classrooms increased. As can be seen from the data, from 1985 to now library changed to a learning resources centre with computer rooms. The road to playing fields cut in present. Count of classrooms rose from 2 to 3 and storeys in the classroom block climbed to 1. There are new buildings like a pool and fitness centre that they did not have in 1985. Playing fields in today's day provide their territory with educational and sports facilities. The little car park that was in 1985 cut in current days. The car park

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updated

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from rectangle to semi-circle. The population of students during

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year has up to 2300 from 1500.

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one erection that does not modify is the office.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self- employed?

Many people in the world are learning English for personal development. How does learning English in an English-speaking country differ from learning it in a non-English-speaking country? Why?