The diagram below gives the information about the Hawaiian island chain in the centre of the Pacific Ocean.

The diagram below gives the information about the Hawaiian island chain in the centre of the Pacific Ocean.
The chart provides the stages of forming
Hawaiian
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island chain in the Pacific Ocean.
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, the process of creating
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Hawaii took a long time and went through various stages before they became what we know them to be nowadays. It is marked that the chain began to form almost 80 million years ago on solid dense rock. The formation is initiated about 2883
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down near
core
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the core
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of the Earth. About the same distance
due to
movements of tectonic plates ‘Hot spot’ existed which erupted the material called “magma” and spume remained static respectively.
This
way magma spume was formed.
Then
numerous eruptions took place which
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up
volcano
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the volcano
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until it
risen
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above ocean level.
Subsequently
, eruptions stopped as the Pacific tectonic plate has been moving to the
north – west
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direction about 7-9
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per
a
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year and close magma spume. There were eight major islands formed in the Pacific Ocean – Niihau, Kauai, Oahu, Molokai, Lanai, Maui,
Kahoolawe
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and Kahoolawe
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which are 0-100
kilometers
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kilometres
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away from each other.
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