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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph presented the percentage of GPD's components in the UK from 1992 to 2000. The data was categorized into 2 sources of GPD: IT and
Service
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 Industry.
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, the contribution of
GDP
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 from both IT and
Service
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Industries
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 experienced a consistent increase year-on-year from 1992 to 2000.
Furthermore
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, the
GDP
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 from
IT
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the IT
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 sector was always higher than
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Service
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the Service
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Industries
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 sector with the biggest
gap
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 happening in 2000. In 1992, IT
industries
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 contributed to around 6% of the UK's total
GDP
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 and went up consistently to around 14% in 2000. It was observed that on average, the GPD from IT increased by around 2% every year with only 1 exception in 1996 as it slightly decreased to around 8%. Even so, it went back to around 12% in 1998. Even though IT's
GDP
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 was consistently higher than
Service
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's, it was almost overpassed in 1996 with only a 1%
gap
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. As for the
Service
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Industries
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, its
GDP
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 started
with
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at
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 4% in 1992 and rose steadily until it reached 8% in 2000. The differences in
GDP
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 contribution between
IT
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the IT
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 and
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Service
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the Service
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 industry started with a 2%
gap
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 and got smaller until it reached its smallest
gap
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 in 1996.
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, it got bigger in the following year and ended up with an 8%
gap
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, the biggest value in the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words service, gdp, industries, gap with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • components
  • GDP
  • consumption
  • investment
  • government spending
  • net exports
  • display
  • categories
  • largest
  • increase
  • stable
  • range
  • decline
  • fluctuate
  • gradual
  • positive values
  • negative values
  • overall
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