Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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culture
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their dress and
clothes
, that they choose them
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people
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culture
,
likewise
the method of living in these days. In
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clothes
and
culture
have
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a
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complicated communication
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. Consistently. Despite,
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modern
life
. On the one hand, these days, communication between
personality
and
culture
is not ignorable. So, the character of
person
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is undergoing change.
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mechanical
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people
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work, so they prefer to put
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kind of
clothes
that are suitable for them at work,
likewise
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to their
personality
.
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,
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clothes
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from the waiters in an office. It is that
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the boss could not put a casual
clothes
,
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that
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, will be unsuitable for his position.
Fom
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From
my point of view, dressing
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kind of
clothes
can be related to
personality
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the personality
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and character of a person in his or her position in society, that it is a
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habit
.
On the other hand
, some
people
believe protecting their
culture
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clothes
is a main task for them, particularly, when they are living among different
culture
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. It is that
,
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they think
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of the local
clothes
is a way to
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the
ancestors
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thought
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.
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they tend to utilize their
clothes
in developing the
people
's keen to
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to
rise
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raise
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their awareness about
culture
.
However
,
this
way is beneficial, but some of them are not comfortable and suitable in different
situation
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. It
has
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contrasted by modern
life
and ancient
life
. As you know, some children of these
people
do not like
dress
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to dress
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local
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clothes
, just because of their sporty or artistic and stuff like
this
personality
. In my opinion, the identification of
people
's character
according to
their
clothes
is a predictable factor,
likewise
not recognizable. In conclusion, it is true that
choice
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the choice
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clothes
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of clothes
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for everyone can help
the
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other
people
to increase their awareness about their
personality
, but it
is not be
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a certain way or factor, by
reasont
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reason
of,
the
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apply
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personality
and choice
clothes
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of clothes
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is
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related to
kind
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the kind
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of pupils lifestyle
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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