In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, technologies are changing the world
above all
in the cars, buses and trucks because in the future they can drive without a
driver
. It is very complex to achieve
this
goal for many reasons but in
this
essay, I will explain my points of view and what are the cons and pros. One of the first reasons is that the guide without
driver
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is more difficult because to design
this
vehicle needs to see some things like the
dangerous
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of the
roads
, the accidents and the traffic congestion.
For instance
,
this
can reduce
hazard
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and death on the
roads
because almost all
time
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, the fault is
due to
human errors and
this
can lead
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benefits.
However
, some research shows that in the future almost all
car
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cars
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will be electric and without
driver
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drivers
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and
this
permit
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permits
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to drive in
safer
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way,
for instance
in
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on
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the
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long journey it is more comfortable to stay in a car without
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especially
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in
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the
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because almost all incidents happen at night.
Furthermore
, I believe that many companies should invest to create new cars to use the technology to increase
the
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safety on the
roads
.
To sum up
, one day I hope that there will be a lot of vehicles without
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drivers
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because
like
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I had
describe
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there are many advantages and
this
could reduce
hazard
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hazards
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and death on the
roads
. I think that the cons outweigh the pros and I am convinced that
this
will be the right solution to improve
the
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travelling.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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